Country Crow

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Country Crow

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This is the start of a fat lazy old country crow
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Some minor changes have been made.
I have added more character to the face and there is now a bandana around the neck.
The body has been slightly slimmed down and given some more contour.
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Re: Country Crow

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I like the crow Jeff.
There are two things I notice.
The Bandana would look better if the front was down further so it looks like it is hanging, instead of looking stiff.
The eyes (always the most important part of any living thing) really need the specular highlights adjusted. The sheen is just too large. I think all your models would look better with this one adjustment. Sometimes they almost looks blind with that large sheen.
As far as animation...your my Jedi Master... :bananacool2:
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Good points to make Bob, I will have to pay better attention to the eyes I tend to get carried away with the sheen and gloss.
You are also correct about the bandana, it needs to have more flow.
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Re: Country Crow

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I agree.... If you manage life in the eyes, you've got it mate. =)
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Here is a much better eye gloss and the bandana has been contoured to match the chest area and given more flow.
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Here is yet an even better set of eyes.
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Re: Country Crow

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Add a straw hat with a feather and we have a hillbilly....
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