WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by LeonRegis » 16 Apr 2010, 18:03

Hey I'm happy that it is on the final stage, I finished but accepet critics, and that's what I want... the final stage is, finished until someone point something to fix or improve.

Thanks for all your help, I really enjoyed this one. :mrgreen:
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by marcel » 16 Apr 2010, 18:59

Nice atmosphere. Maybe a small gradient on the background would be better (lighter at the left and darker at the right). More contrast at the bottom of the scene can enhance the dust at the horizon. This will give more depth. It is only a work of photo editing and personal artistic view.
Why bullets were not used? they are positioned on the ground as if they had served but they are full.
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by LeonRegis » 16 Apr 2010, 19:58

Thanks Marcel! Yes, the scene is better that way, but what you talked about contrast at the bottom of the image? You mean that I need to select the bottom of the image (20%?) and then increase the contrast?

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marcel wrote:Why bullets were not used? they are positioned on the ground as if they had served but they are full.
Actually most of bullets in the scene had been used and just those closer to the guns (and camera) are full.
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by marcel » 16 Apr 2010, 20:42

leonregis: "but what you talked about contrast at the bottom of the image?"
To enhance the effect of depth, create a mask then add more contrast and dark. Just a little like you can see at the right. It was what i did in my first test.
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by bitkar » 19 Apr 2010, 10:25

hey not a bad job at all :)
it can be always better, right q is: is it good enough?
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by theuns » 20 Apr 2010, 11:39

WOW! The scene is really starting to take shape nicely... looking great marcel! :)

I tend to be way too impatient and quickly loose interest if a scene takes too long, as a result, I have a lot of unfinished scenes and models just sitting on my hard drive :(
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by marcel » 20 Apr 2010, 13:41

theuns wrote:WOW! The scene is really starting to take shape nicely... looking great marcel! :)
I hope you understand that is a work of Leonregis! I just show some idea to enhance the result. ;)
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by theuns » 22 Apr 2010, 08:02

Ahh, I thought it was funny that I saw your name with those images but it didn't sink in and I didn't read all the posts :P Sorry, leonregis :) Great work on this, love the atmosphere and lighting effects, really gives it that special something...
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by LeonRegis » 23 Jul 2010, 02:55

This is the final version
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Re: WW2 Entrenchment after Battle

Post by v3rd3 » 23 Jul 2010, 07:00

Very nice Leon....

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